Te Ahuahu

Here is my writing about Te Ahu ahu. Our focus was to use powerful verbs and adjectives.

Te AhuAhu

Aaaaahhh! The school bus screeched to a holt on the side of the dusty metal road. We jumped out and lined up like soldiers. Mrs Whitelaw opened the gate and we stormed off. Finally we reached the track. I moaned. My legs were sore. We walked for what seemed like hours. Finally we reached the top.  Suddenly a car drove up and stopped.  A person jumped out. His name was Hone.  He talked about World War 1 and 2. After his talk we all walked down to the old gate and ate lunch. I didn’t have lots of lunch. It was time to go. We all started walking down the mountain.

WOOHOO Finally we were at the bottom. “The bus is here!” yelled Mrs Craig.

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