Autumn - cameo

                                                                               Written Language Sample

Cameo

Learning Intention: I am learning how to use appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo writing.

Success Criteria: I am able to find and highlight adjectives and verbs in a cameo and explain why they work.

I am able to write sentences with appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo.

Task:  To write a poem about autumn, using appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs.

Remember to:  Punctuate your work correctly.

        Use careful spelling and sounding out

WINTER

Winter blows its cold icy breath everywhere.

The early morning frost is crunchy and white covering the green grass.

The loud wind howls in the freezing air like a stray dog hungry for a bone.
Tiny snowflakes flutter down to land on the frozen ground,

covering everything with a white sparkling blanket.

The trees become bare, brown bones standing like statues admiring the view.

Heavy rain falls from the dark grey sky, pounding against the soggy ground.

Chilly bitterness in the air, winter is here.

Here is my writing!

Autumn - DRAFT

The Autumn  wind  blows like a harkany. The claire green grass is  like a ice block .

The wind howls like a hairy dog looking for food. The cash down on the ground .

The leaves change colour some go red wale some go yallow .The icy cold is finally here .

Wind whirls the leaves around like a tornado.

Autumn - Published

The Autumn wind blows like a hurricane. The clear green grass is cold like an ice block . The wind howls like a hairy dog looking for food. The bare branches crash down on the ground. The leaves change colour like a rainbow. Some go red and some go yellow. The icy cold wind blows everywhere. Autumn is finally here. Wind whirls the leaves around like a tornado. The cold icy rain pounds on the soggy ground.

Written Language Sample

Cameo

Learning Intention: I am learning how to use appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo writing.

Success Criteria: I am able to find and highlight adjectives and verbs in a cameo and explain why they work.

I am able to write sentences with appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo.

Task:  To write a poem about autumn, using appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs.

Remember to:  Punctuate your work correctly.

        Use careful spelling and sounding out